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BoS - vs Grant and Al pt4

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English --> Forth and last part, and now before I go sleep, I'll explain you a couple things about this part: (edit: because I'm pretty sure you didn't go through my opponent's reference sheets and you don't remember mine)
- Al's magnets + Koa electricity = electro iman with high attraction
- Attraction attracts a tack that takes Annie's ribbon, who belonged to Sourcer, her cat
- Attraction attracts iron support, which "chases" Annie
- Annie regains consciousness, Grant saved her from the iron support, that got stuck through Koa and Al
- Annie is sad because she couldn't get her ribbon
- Al can't move because he's losing sand and because his arms are turning into mud because of Annie's sadness (Sadness feeling translates into water power for Koa)
- Koa can move perfectly because he's made of stuffing, so it doesn't come out of him
- Grant can't feel pain because his bond with Al isn't strong enough
- Annie can't feel pain because her bond with Koa is different


!Xim-nos, I hope to not have made your characters out of character, and if I did, I'm sorry... it's what I understood from their ref sheets.

Español --> Cuarta y última parte. Os voy a explicar un par de cosas sobre esta parte en caso de que no lo entendáis: (editado: porque me figuro que no habéis leído las referencias de mi oponente ni recordáis la mía)
-Imanes de Al + Electricidad de Koa = Electroimán con gran atracción
- La atracción atrae un clavo que se lleva el lazo de Annie, el cual perteneció a Sourcer, su gato
- La atracción atrae el soporte, que "persigue" a Annie
- Annie recupera la conciencia, Grant la ha salvado del soporte, el cual ha atravesado a Grant y Koa
- Annie está triste porque no ha recuperado el lazo
- Al no puede moverse porque está perdiendo arena y porque sus brazos se están volviendo barro a causa de la tristeza de Annie (la tristeza se traduce en poder de agua en Koa)
- Koa se puede mover perfectamente porque está lleno de relleno de peluche, por lo que no sale fuera de él
- Grant no puede sentir dolor porque su lazo con Al no es lo suficientemente fuerte
- Annie no puede sentir dolor porque su lazo con Koa es diferente


Done with pencil
Grant and Alphonses belong :iconxim-nos:
Annie, Koa and Sourcer belong me
For :iconbonds-of-string:
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Oreramar's avatar
Hello, new opponent!

I'm just here to clarify a few things about your characters' abilities and personalities, okay?
I can't find your reference sheet in your gallery...I think I might be missing it when I scan through or something. If you have it uploaded, could you provide me with a link? Thank you.

Right...
First: I get the feeling that Annie and Koa sort of ';play' at knight and lady, though perhaps a bit more seriously than that word denotes. Is this accurate?
Second: That hole will have to be mended. Do you have a particular way that it will be fixed in mind, or should I just say that Annie sewed some patches over Koa's chest and back?
Third: will Grant and Al now be travelling with Annie and Koa? If so, is there a way Al could be fixed, perhaps by shoveling the sand back into him and, again, patching up the holes?

If you have any questions about my characters and their interactions, go ahead and comment on something of mine or note me. Anything that confuses you, I'll be glad to clarify.